I hate myself
For trusting you
I hate you
For loving me
I hate her
Cause shes a whore
I hate myself
For wasting my time on you
I hate you
For seducing me
I hate her
For ripping you from me
Leaving me to bleed in my own tears
I hate me
For missing you
I can’t hate you
Because I still love you
I can’t her
Its not her fault
But I can
Hate myself
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Poetic Grace
Blame Me
This is ex, whore and self hatred
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well done, well written. i like the structure and form good luck
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that was great, i'm feeling that right now, u i hate him, but i love him. very good poem.
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yeah, I can really relate to this one.
I can't believe I trusted my second boyfriend, he was... well, he was not trustworthy at all. -
nic
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nice words
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*whistles* good poem. lots of emotion... good job! and i know what you mean, its hard to hate the others, but easy to hate yourself. i am going through that same thing right now.
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I think we all probably go through this at least once in a lifetime, therefore we can all relate to it.
You summed the subject up nicely.
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Very deep intruth...we can't blame anyone but ourselves and therefore in the end we often end up hating ourselves...well done...
Best to you!
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