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Trapped In My Mind

YOU'RE [[Trapped]] in my *mind*

I can't get you out of


                          -There-

How come everytime you talk to *Me*

    I can't help but <>Smile<>


I believe that YOU like me,

                                too......


I've seen you ~LOOK~ at me,
I've seen you ~GLANCE~ at me,
I've seen you ~STARE~ at me.


They are all the ::::::same::::::


I love it when you {Speak}
                            to me.





















I love it when you're ~WATCHING~ me,
                                  even when I don't know it.

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  • Erika Elektrikka
    February 22, 2008

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    This is great. I love your emphasis on certain words. This was wonderful! Very good dirty pretty!

    Good Luck,
    Erika