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Watching

I see you
standing there
watching
there's only so many times you can look away
there, i caught you again
yes, YOU
those eyes
they capture a moment
like a photograph
always watching, always knowing, JUST when to pounce
i can't stay here all day
watching
waiting
i hear the A train coming
You dont!!!

You weren't watching!!!!!

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Its one of these dark moments on a tube station platform. Mkae up your own mind, create your own ending.

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