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Love her

I love her,
my friend with a big smile on her face
a friend who stands up to people to protect me
a friend that fights but always forgives and becomes cool again

I love her.
A friend who is funny, and kind
a friend who is just like a mother but isn't
a friend who is like a first aid kit and a doctor at the same time

I love her,
The kindest girl in the world
even when I'm angry with her
or to upset to talk
to this girl

I love her
she's my idol
I want to be like her
that girl,
Is my sister.

Author notes

I love my sister I want to be like her in the good ways
even though we fight we always get back together I love her. Thank you for reading my poem.
I like this poem this is my favorite poem because I love my sister and i feel she's really special to me.

A contest entry

This is a poem I made for my sister

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Comments

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  • SignifyingNothing
    August 6, 2008

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    This is a great poem. It really captures the way you feel about your sister. Quite lovely, and I can see why it won two trophies. This was very nice, and it made me smile. I have a sister, and I love her too (though she sure can be a pain :-) Keep writing. I loved this part:

    "a friend who is like a first aid kit and a doctor at the same time"

    that was a nice way of putting it. Thanks so much for entering, you have great things to say.


  • SmartBrick
    May 22, 2008

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    One word describes this poem...Beautiful!Thank u millions for the contest entry!~

    signed confused


  • daviscth silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    I bet she just loved that you wrote this for her. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting in my contest.


  • Miss Chievous
    April 9, 2008

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    This is a very good poem, but it doesn't have 14 lines ,
    So i can't have be able to be judged(sorta)
    But AWESOME!!


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    April 1, 2008

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    I'm sure this is a very nice poem but I have to remove it from my contest because it has far exceeded the thirty WORD limit. I'm sorry.


  • Perception
    March 10, 2008
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    Awww... this is sooo sweet hehehe


  • AKM Takayuki
    March 1, 2008
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    Aw, I am an older sister. My younger sister would never admit to wanting to be like me! Very cute poem. I'm so happy to see you are close to your sister. When you grow older, your sister is the one friend you will always have until you are both old together. Very nice poem. Good luck in the contest!

    ~Takayuki~


  • DeadlyTurnip
    February 24, 2008

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    AWWWWW!!!!!!

    Lindsay this is adorable!! *starts gushing* You're such an amazing poet for your age and this is one of the cutest things I've read on this site. I'm sure Kathryn loved it and if she didn't...well, her loss, right?


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    Wow, a lot of heartfelt words here, this is amazingly done little one. well done. best of luck to you in the contest, could you please do me a favour and put your screen name in the author notes for me? Thank you xxxxxxx

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