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Defect

The spiders weep for their long rotten eggs
Thimble woven from brain tissue
Follow the path of crumbs into this domain
A single fool crawls himself into my grasp and I sneer
Ram your head against the side and kill yourself before I have a chance
My one game of fun, would you deny me such pleasure?
Needles rammed through your carcass
School girl giggles erupt from this long unused throat
One through the eye and two through the legs
Webbed flies dry throat their cries of anguish
Leaving me in a confused thread whispering through the wind
They weep for you my prized victim
But no one can stop this game for once it’s started I must finish
A thick needled pin prick and your mind collapses
Scream in your last brain dead moment
Ensnared in my labyrinth of needles
Killing you slowly from the outside in
Mind numbing pain shoots through every euphoric shot nerve
Comprehension has left your desperate grasp, and I have one needle left
The eyes have such a soft spot between them
I slowly, delicately, push into your soft unwillingly flesh
A drug has settled itself in me and I cry in my dazed confusion

















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  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    April 8, 2008
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    I loved this! It was dark, creepy, morbid, and all those other wonderful things that I love I do suggest, though, that you choose a more readable font... I had to highlight this to read it, and it kinda hurt my eyes! That said, great write, and welcome to the finals.

    Laura xxx