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Rain

rain
falling on my face
gracefullly
hopefully
these times we will remember
in this early november

rain
falling
falling
gone

 

as it hits the ground and forms puddles

i wonder

where does it all go???

 

rain

let the rain fall

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  • flowinginthewind
    March 7, 2008
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    yah i just love to listen to it hit the ground.


  • catz Moderators member
    March 6, 2008
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    I'm always pulled in by poems with rain in the title And this one is no disappointment. I lived in Seatttle before moving to PHoenix 11 years ago and I still miss the rain.

    You've written a poignant piece here... and yeah, where does it all go??

    Dee


  • ForeverNightMusic
    February 22, 2008
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    wow ! rain is like my favorite thing, and i was born in november !
    <<< where does it all go ??? >>>
    i don't know !!!
    love it