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Thank You For Making Me Happy

I was waiting by the door
Just waiting for someone to adore
Then along came you
All of a sudden and out of the blue
I knew just then and there
That for you my heart I would bare
You were just so amazing
Even a little bit crazy
You would always hold my hand
Even when we were out with your band
You said that you would love me forever
That we would always be together
I knew it was all too good to be true
And now im all alone and blue
But im still thankful for what we had
Even though it turned out bad
I was truely habby when I was with you
So for everything, I thank you.  

Author notes

i wrote it thinking of my ex boyfriend Erick... even though he broke up with me and was a jerk about and now refuses to talk to me... i still cant hate him... and if i had a chance to repeat what we went through while knowing that the end would still be the same... id do it again in a heart beat

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  • Celinda Luna
    February 22, 2008

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    Very vivid.

    Hi, I just had a crazy thought. You wrote this stilling loving him. So full of detail. I wonder how this piece would sound if you hated him.


    • PinUpLovesGreaser
      February 25, 2008
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      ooh hey i wrote it... its called YOU... but i dont think i was really mad enough... its hard for me to hate anyone..

    • PinUpLovesGreaser
      February 22, 2008
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      hmmm... interesting point... i'll try to write you one thinking back to the day that he had just broken up with me.