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New Day

Darkness which has fallen,
Across this land, fails.
As light emancipates a warming glow,
To the life of the world.
As the colours flood everything,
Greens of the grass, rainbow of the sky,
The spectrum of life appears,
On the horizon, as the birds,
Wake from their sleep.
Begin to call.

Darkness fades within this sky.
As warmth burns through,
Showing the sparkling lake,
Frost glistens, like a pulsing star.
Gleaming life, little crystals fade.
As the sun, wakes the earth,
With its glowing gaze of love.


Darkness is shattered,
As the light punches through.
Orange blossoms in the sky.
As the sun slowly rises,
Creating a soothing mist on the lake.
As a deer licks the morning dew,
Off the trees.

The frost,
Decimated by warmth,
This, is the euphoria of life.
As the sun soothingly,
Begins the new day.

Author notes

Option Four: Write me something that I can visualize so well that it will blow my mind.
No this does not mean write an erotic poem; it means describe a beautiful outdoor scene,
Or something. No “and then I ran my hand …” stuff, my poor eyes couldn’t take it.

This is what i dream to watch one winters morning, i want to watch the blackness of night fade away as the sun rises giving warmth to the world and awaking the life, which surrounds us. This is one of the things on my to do list even if i do freeze in the process to watch it will show the beauty in this world. I hope you all like

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    March 5, 2008

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    Thhis is really a great piece of poetry.
    Your ending was quite amazing.
    I enjoyed a lot.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

  • Poco Loco
    February 24, 2008

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    Beautiful emagery within this creating some vivid and dazzeleing pictures in my mind. Sometimes the most simple day to day happenings of the world can be the most beautiful. Love it bro...good luck!
    xxx


  • La Tua Cantante
    February 22, 2008

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    I definately like it. I can visualize this so well. My favorite part is:
    "Darkness is shattered,
    As the light punches through
    Orange blossoms in the sky
    As the sun slowly rises"

    I thank you also for not corrupting my poor mind. This is truly beautiful.


    • Darkened Seraph
      February 22, 2008
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      lol i hadn't finished adding the gramma, or spell checking it, i have a habit of publishing then adding gramma and spell checking, but i'm glad i haven't destroyed your mind