I still feel you...
Like a breath of wind
That can't be traced
I see you smiling at me...
After being gone for so long...
And I remember your arms surounding me
You gave me love
In a crazy world
Then you left again...
The tears run down my face
As I watch you
Graduate in the shadows I hide...
I always believed in you
As you fly away I hope you know
That you are always in my heart...
Like a broken fairy tale
Author notes
this is for picture B
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Comments
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wistful... sad... well written though. thanks.
peace.
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aww that's great! thanks for entering! good luck!
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umm 5th verse..1st line..typo on believed..missing the "e"..I like your ending..your flow is good..not partial to capitalizing every first word..makes it read choppy..proper punctuation would make it much better..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..
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LOVE IT
life is sorta like a broken fairy tale
i love the first three lines. BRAVO -
A beautiful piece...very wistful....very longing...
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sad,
beautiful,
and touching
to say the very least... I love it! -
So sad and so painful. . .pure and pwerful. This is so good. I love your word choice and really liked this one
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