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I shall not give in

Slipping further down,
Down into the dark abyss.
I hang on with the every fiber of my being,
My fingers growing weary.
Shouting for help,
Searching the open sky above me.
No one no hope.
I have to get out of this bottomless pit,
Before it swallows me whole.
Loosing my life,
Loosing everything I hold so dear.
I surge forward,
Straining and finding the next foot hold,
To push me up to find the next finger grip.
I continue and I climb.
I reach the top just as it starts to rain,
Yet I pull myself over the ridge to safety.
I find that I am only on a safe ridge, half way up.
I take a few deep breaths,
I start to climb, yet again.

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    February 22, 2008

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    WE ALL CAN RELATE TO THESE WORDS IT IS ALWAYS A STRUGGLE, BUT THERE IS NO WHERE ELSE I RATHER GO. EXCELLENT WRITE GOD BLESS