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Afraid

Closing my eyes, I fell broken on the ground
Crying so much, I thought I would've drowned
I can see it in your eyes,
Hiding your pain away from me, no longer any lies
I'm afraid to show
Because I cant let you go...

I'm afraid of what there is to be...
For there's nothing left to me

this is very metaphoric, dont look at it in a litteral sense, Do you understand it?

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  • inhisimage
    May 15, 2008
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    i love this. It is deep and full of great emotion. awesome write


  • xXemosoraXx
    February 25, 2008
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    i like, it's really deep.....i can relate