sunrise of rebirth
glorious salutations
gossamer wings fly
Author notes
This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts, all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 45 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you so much for your Haiku
I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT
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SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!
There is nothing quite like watching a butterfly floating upon a warm breeze on a bright and sunshiny day.
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Thank you Kevin. I love writing about butterflies. There is something magical and beautiful about them. You take care, Sandy
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Sweet Sandy
You have enchanted my heart and soul with this delightfully spoken haiku that is larger than it appears
♥
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Thank you Amanda. You are so sweet to read poetry. I so appreciate it. Take care. Always, Sandy
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I love the form and vibration it creates
(what is gossamer)?
Tamara
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Thank you Tamara. Alwatys a pleasure when my friend stops by. You take care, Sandy .
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wow
I like this style but struggle with expression, you are truly gifted...I fish and have watched your explanation happen many times and I still would not come anywhere near this...my trips to the water will be more colorful now though.
Simon
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Hello Simon. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. So glad you enjoyed my poem. I struggle with the syllable counts too. Thats why I don't write many haiku. You take care, Sandy
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This is a beautiful read. I doenjpy your work. I read this listing to the rain on my roof, soft music in the background, anda littlerum and coke. The silent ending to a beautiful day. Bless you.
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What a lovely thought. Pitter patter of the rain on the roof as you read my poem
A lovely thought. Thank you for the wonderful comment. You take care, Sandy
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You do well
at everything you do little one. Haiku and Hei to you...mac
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Hello Mac, You are always so encouraging woith your words. Thank you. I shall share my hot choclate with you on this cold winter day.
. Bless you my friend. Sandy
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yhis is indeed pretty and to share it with us is awesome, I too love Haiku, and other self made forms, thank you for sharing, good luck...
Moons
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A pleasure to hear from you moons. Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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i love it when people use the word "gossamer" in poems, something about it seems so ephemeral. i felt like the first line had a strong religious sense to it but it was nicely balanced out by the nature scene at the end. well done!
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A pleasure to read your comment. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Take care, Sandy
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What wonderful words to go with a lovely picture! Beautiful-Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for this lovely comment. I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care, Sandy
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