You captivate me
faithful fingers flitting
over sensitive skin, soulfully
lips brushing against mine
strong hands
gentley holding me still
keeping me, touching me
laying on my long green coat
the one my mother wore before
Sand crunching beneath,
as we held each other
Under an October sky
Author notes
We held each other close that day, when we finally got to be with each other for the first time, on that beach along the Missouri, under a cold October Sky.
Soon, we pray, we hope, we will be holding each other again...this time under a warm August Sky, in the shadow of the Black hills.
This is for the love of my life...I love you.
~bon apetit!
A contest entry
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*sigh* ahh, the memories
Comments
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I;m sorry you didn't read the rules so unfortunately I have to DQ this entry. Great poem thought.
~Ruth~ -
Awww
So sweet!
I liked the alliteration, and your use of imagery.
Nice penning!
Good luck in my contest!
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A very beautifully written poem! I love the imagery and the play on words here. Very nice!
~Chelsey~
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