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girl: hey babe,

boy:whats up babygirl?

girl: nothing i miss you thats all

boy: yeah i miss you to

girl: how is evrything

....
...

girl: are you still there?=/

girl: well i love you i wish we could have talked

...
...

girl: your with her i am sure

girl:you only talk to me when your not with her thats messed up!!

    [later that night]

boy: Hey babygirl

girl: so now you can talk

boy:im sorry

girl:whatever its fine

boy: i love you

girl: i know..

boy: so what u doing?

girl: i really hate her, i hate her cause she has you

girl: you dont care about me when your with her

girl: but when your not with her you love me and make me feel so amazing

girl: i cant do this i hate it


boy: When you first met me what was the first thing that went through your mind?

girl: your simply amazing

girl: when you first met me what was the first thing that went through your mind?

boy: She is Perfect!

girl:wow im sorry

boy: i love this girl!

boy: that was my second thought

girl: I LOVE YOU!

Author notes

So this is so not a poem but i really wanted to write this down i liked it..xoxo

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  • Cerbie20
    February 27, 2008

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    even though this isn't a poem, it's still good. a lot of people can relate to this... i can relate to this, a friend of mine said that she relates to this, and it just hits home, you know? and the thing is, so many people would normally say, hey, if he has a girl, then ditch him, but i say, if he loves you, and you love him, go for it, and don't ever let go.
    cerbie


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 22, 2008
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    You're such a sweet girl

    Love Dad~ xo


  • Lady Australis silver member
    February 22, 2008
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    its beautiful


  • prettyface17
    February 22, 2008
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    This is really sweet.
    its tamie btw, i love you Mizzvanna