Wonderously refreshing cool and clear
A joy to behold when the water lilies appear
Trickling steam, still glass lake
Eternities spent lying awake
Returning to home there's me drawing up the rear
Author notes
As a child I could never spend enough time near the lake, trousers rolled up wading in, catching frogs and minnows, and never feeling hungry when mom called for dinner.
A contest entry
- Still Water by NurseChilly.
1750 points, ended March 18, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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Nice,
One of my fav element is water, by far it calms me.
I don't know, maybe we have so much in us.
-Timothy
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a pretty accrostic... well done
one niggle, the red coloured font is very hard to read on this background... hurts the eyes
many thanks for entering
G.x
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very refreshing write,can almost hear the water bubbling over the stones in the lake,very good,Mom
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