blood flowing through the vain,
blood spilling from the wrists
disgusted inside
disgusted with hate.
nobody gets it so fucking forget it
no matter where i go,
no matter where ive been
ill always have my past,
ill always have the pain.
i dont want your tears
i dont want your sympathy,
so go be happy,
put on a smile
give out a hug,
we both know its fake but no worries just sit back keep quiet hold it inside
because im done trying to keep the peace!
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 150 entries
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watcha think?
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wow, that's perfect. I can relate to that soo well! It had a certain charm among it. Please put your option number in the notes!
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i can relate exactly perfectly and to a T!!!! love it!
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o my...it seem the last comment you got from SPOT49 was me on my friends page...you entered my contest...but i do believe it was a mistake in my internet...truly sorry...
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OMG...(O my gosh)....this is so wonderful...sad..but...great!!!
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Wow i too know this all too well...perfectly written and well thought out...good luck in your contests.
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Oh lord,
I know this a bit too well,
oh yeah.
I've been there.
I was quite the actress.
And the fake girl.
always with a smile yet dying inside
with scars all over my body,
but...
you will dare to fly, no?
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Oh yeah brittni keep up the kickass attitude!
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