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Afraid

Beat by her dad at night
Put down by her mom all day
For her life she has to fight
but still she makes her way

She hides how she feels inside
She says that shes okay
But her emotions are on a ride
And going home she's afraid

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 26, 2008

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    i hope this is not personal

    aww wow. this is so short, but it told such a powerful and tragic story. very strong, this poem is awesome, with the rhyme and all. keep penning, and keep gping strong