living in silence,
feeling alone
thoughts in my head, chill me to the bone
fits of depression thoughts that have made me cry,
i want to voice them but in my head they will hide
wont someone help me?
someone make me speak
get rid of these thoughts cause there making me weak.
but no one helps,
im alone in my head
living in silence
ALONE!!
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 150 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
watcha think?
Comments
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can you speak to me?
i am listening and i mean it sincerely.
don't let this consume you,
don't let this kill you
even though am sure you most likely feel as if it already has but you can survive. you will survive. will you beleive me?
..Simply Me♥ -
this is a sad poem this is me i hope we can be friends if we are not all ready thanks for sharing god bless you forever and always love dianna lee green also knowned as serenity lynn silvermoon
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A lot of people will be able to relate to the feelings you describe. Depression eats away at your soul and distorts everything around you. Keep fighting the darkness and don't let the bastards win.
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