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Breath






to breath of dove

I too-

will learn to          ~fly~





Author notes

Picture inspiration with thoughts of children

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 22, 2008

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    Ya know, gold is over a thousand buck an ounce. Congratulations on the win. This is soft as angel wings, and just as spiritual. I truly enjoyed it. Very well done.
    Kelli

  • tara wilson gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    Excellent...congrats on the gold, Mal...this is beautiful


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 22, 2008
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    Absolutely stunning in so few words ~ well done fine poet... x


  • suseann
    February 22, 2008
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    Greatly inspired poem on the aspirations of the innocent. And so.. poetic is your thoughts on it.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    February 22, 2008
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    lovely god bless


  • Nature Song silver member
    February 22, 2008

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    To breath...sigh! Your words simply melt my heart once again my friend. So few and so well put. ~Sie


  • Namita
    February 22, 2008

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    This one's cute! Pretty and lovely one, Mal... I love the format of this piece. Good luck in Donna's contest

    - namita

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