unwrapping at last
butterfly kisses touch all
springtime evolving
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts, all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you so much for your Haiku
I appreciate your entry... however your counts are off(5/7/5 requested) L1(4) L2(8* L3(4) , authors notes good, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT
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Thank you Ken for the correction
My head must have been with the Butterflies 
in the clouds...I have now corrected 
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The nature of haiku is, it seems to me, to create beauty in concentrated thought, and that is exactly what you have achieved here. Thanks for the lovely writing
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Thank you for the lovely comments my friend
Glad you enjoyed it
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I love this, shows a subte movement in effective, genlte three lines.
Beautifull portrayed!
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Thank you Glad you enjoyed it
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