exquisite glissade
sun kissed mosaic Pirouettes
on crepe de chine wings.
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts, all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 45 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you so much for your Haiku
I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you dearly for your kind comments and applause.
Shaz xx
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I'm usually not too keen on Haikus, but the words in this one are just endearingly captivating.Extremely well done!
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If this is about butterflies, it is really beautiful.
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