Your eyes reflected my love
As I held the murderous beast
An understanding you couldn't grasp
I replaced destruction with peace
Your eyes reflected my rage
As I held the sword above their heads
Such fury you'd never witnessed
I left destruction in my stead.
So what is it you would see now
Charred and beaten into the ground
Could you even look me in the eye
For failing just before I die
Author notes
I have nothing to say about this peice.
A contest entry
- SHORT POEMS PART 2 by Blooming Poet.
700 points, ended March 23, 2008, 129 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pain/Hurt/Life scars. Release your pain to me by LanguishedLad.
450 points, ended April 24, 2008, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Was it too fast to be really interesting?
Comments
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Such a emotional poem, full of so much intense and vivid pain and anger. I love the images displayed here. This piece really displays your true feelingns and that is great thing for a poem.
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^.^ Imagery is my favorite part of the poem. I realize that the poem doesn't really have much content (which is probably why I didn't get many comments) but I'm glad it entertained you.
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Wow
This piece has spectacular images! I could literally picture this whole thing. Was this written for a reason sis? If so I want to know, I want to help you!
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^.^
Oh, don't worry, Oniisan.
You know that even if it was, I've far too much pride to discuss it. I'm just happy you recognize it and are concerned.
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