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[ Every Picture ]

Every Picture
Turns to every memory
Every memory
Becomes every word
Every word
Becomes of every piece of my heart, thats broken.

I look back at pictures, I remember our first kiss.
A cherished, awaited moment.

The long hours on the phone with not a word.

Staring into eachothers eyes through technology.

To say I dont love you...
I already do.
The pain and frustration it takes to smile and lie through my teeth.

Without you, Im like dust in the wind.

Im just a thing. A person.

But when I was with you, I was somthing more.
I was your lovey-dove.

You were so much to me.
A huge part of my life.
You were honestly my best friend.
No one can change that.

I feel now as if I'm nothing.
Like I just dont have a place.

Songs, on replay.
Music; I still barely make it through the day.

I don't care much for anything.
I can't figure out what to do with myself.
My mind is lost in space.
My heart is completely shattered and lost.
I have no one to go to, no where to turn.
No one makes me feel the way you do.

Your voice is my weakness.
Your eyes were my stars.
Your arms were my moon, that craddled me.

When you sang to me,
I know it was a bit pitchy, off key.
But it made me smile, and my heart danced.

Now music is.. music.
Words are always thoughts of you.
Love...
Is lost....

Because I loved you, I'm alone.
Because I loved you, I cry.

It is all, because I love you

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  • donttellmeyoucare
    March 1, 2008

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    THis is pretty cool I like your style and the way it sounds I especially like these lines:
    Your voice is my weakness.
    Your eyes were my stars.
    Your arms were my moon, that craddled me


  • Old Fool
    February 29, 2008

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    An excellent write..
    So much Soul, so much emotion..
    So much.. You..

    Hats off, my dear lady..

    Love and Hugz and All that Jazz xx Evert


  • Loves wind
    February 22, 2008
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    hearts...hearts hearts hearts! its really good, i dk wat to say except that its good.

    but yea, its really good.
    <3 Rose


  • Rendered Old
    February 22, 2008
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    WOW.....

    just........ WOW