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~*~*~My Haven~*~*~

compassionate soul
sweet serenity
winds of kindness
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to me
Gifted upon wings of a dove
my haven's your love

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  • Judith Chandler
    March 14, 2008
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    Nice playful write and expression of love.

  • midnightblue1272
    February 23, 2008
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    So beautiful

    I feel a sense of calm after reading this. Fine work, sis.


    • onesugar gold member
      February 23, 2008
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      Cheers bro, always appreciate your comments
      ~sugar~


  • maa gold member
    February 23, 2008

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    what a beautiful form-poem, I love the association of your message of unconditional love and the symbol of the calice (of the heart) ...

    wonderful !


    maa


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 22, 2008
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    So sweetly enchanting... x


    • onesugar gold member
      February 23, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment
      valued and appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • xkadiex
    February 22, 2008
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    this is so wounduful x


    • onesugar gold member
      February 22, 2008
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      Glad you enjoyed

      Value and appreciate you reading

      ~sugar~

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