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Your Spirit

Your Spirit like a graceful dove
to worldly man aloof,
to babes and little ones
Your Spirit like a mother hen

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 22, 2008
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    Creatively captivating... x


  • Malabu
    February 22, 2008

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    hi carly...might want to lose the caps...and add s to spirit or make your just you...just a suggestion hun..the poem is cute all in all

  • goalsv
    February 22, 2008
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    Another wonderful Haiku! Our spirit like a graceful dove beautiful line.