What a grand possession
A grand necessity,
To sustain the very life
Entrusted to you and me,
Retain it's purity.
Of the things you thirst for,
For water, you should thirst the more.
Let's treasure this great gift,
If on earth we want to live
For without it, soon death comes,
Engulfing the unfortunate ones!
A contest entry
- Still Water by NurseChilly.
1750 points, ended March 18, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
point out misspellings or things I can improve upon in a kind and friendly way--THANKS!
Comments
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plenty of food for the fishes here, many thanks for entering this contest
well done
Gill
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"Water, water, everywhere and not a drop to drink" remember those lines? Yes, we do need water and you said it so eloquently in your poem. I . myself, do not drink enough of this great gift of God. If we drank more water (not with scotch) I body would indeed be pure. Beautiful words in your verse. Thank yoy.
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