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In the dark

she lay on her bed softly sleeping
the cover was on the floor
every curve in her body was revealed
she let out a deep breath and moved her smooth legs against the silk sheet

he stood there and watched
he would normally wake her up but tonight she looked so
beautiful he didnt want to

he thought about everything they had been through
he knew that she would not be happy if she new that they werent spending there last night together
but in his mind they were because this was the happiest he had ever seen her

he walked towards the door
she slowly opened her eyes
stop she said
but he carried on walking

she cried herself back to sleep
was it a dream or had her baby come and gone for the last time ?
she would just have to wait for the next night

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  • amberbrownie
    February 22, 2008

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    this is a really good thing and i just love ur imagination love Amberbrownie

    • becci loves x x
      April 18, 2008
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      thankS. All my poems are based on my real experiences or things that are alike xx