I was sitting
in the garden,
Master,
all alone
accompanied
by my pain
and a drizzle
of rain
my heart
felt cold
as stone
when a nameless bird
(forgive me
my ignorance ...
Your command was
for us to reign)
suddenly called out
your wellknown
Name:
Blinded by sorrow
I looked up
barely seeing
this brilliant
shine
reflected
in his eye:
But then I became
aware
of the swift
evaporation
of the Lie ...
I am not alone:
Oh how I love Thee,
Lord!
I saw pure Love
reflected
in his eye
You touched
this solitaire
called heart
turned stone
to flesh …
(stone chat, was the bird ...
the little one
with the reddish breast ...)
myra
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Written February 7th, 2002
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wow was the bird the little one with the reddish breast. Very cool line. This is wonderfully written and it was a pleasure.
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To see Him in the eye of our Brothers,
in the flight of the sparrow,
in the breath of life,
in our pain - our sorrows
To watch Him see us through and
To know Him.
There is no greater gift. -
With a sad heart beating the world is there, reaching, reflections fire the dance. A beautiful piece, so very gentle and loving.
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There is a peace that overtakes me, as i read of you..something more glorious than even your wonderful words are at work within you..and i do know Who that something is..
Your Light radiates brighter than any i've read here..and gives me knowledge of ...
aaaaand before i go making myself look more creepy, i'll leave it at that
Your talent is astounding..but even more so, your spirit..
i've seen your name, but hadn't read of you until this night..i thank you for taking time to read of me..so that i, in turn, came to you...i will be back...
much love & peace
~Pamela -
This was a very beautiful and inspiring piece of work. It is truly a delight to find someone who keeps the good word in their heart. God Bless. Have fun. Steve
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What a fabulous way of telling God that you see him in everything, or how exquisite the moments when you do are. Often I find in the present moment God provides bliss just waiting to be realised. The change of tone in this poem is just brilliant, from the cold drizzle to the ecstasy of recognition. Thankyou for sharing your understanding Love RXXXX
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Thank you gecko, aiwaz and rogue 24. You are welcome.
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great poem!
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this could only have been written by an ancient soul...may i please sit at yr feet?
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felt like I was there with you.
wonderful workings -
Thank you Chase and Andy ... I'll pay you a visit, too ...
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wonderfully comforting and expressive write .... Andy
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:o)
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Thank you CL, S & Y!
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Glorious - like an anthem.
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I agree w/the Bombay, very insightful!
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InSIGHTful!
Out of SIGHT!
The EYES & ears love it!
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