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Warmth

Sparkle morning light,
on butterflies a flicker
New warmth stirs my soul







Author notes

"this is a great form of poetry, that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it up beautifully in such short verse"

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    March 21, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your Haiku I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form, Authors notes, OK. Thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT


  • Kelli Marie
    February 26, 2008

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    I really like the last line the best. It warms me as well. I think you did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli