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it's a struggle to breath, it's a struggle to feel
i cannot smile, my wounds won't heal
overcome with feeling of emptyness....numb
cannot help thinking, is it something ive done?
waking up every day, is a chore i cannot do
theres nothing in life, to help me through

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  • Nick B
    February 22, 2008
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    very sad, i love emotional poetry, great job


  • xkadiex
    February 22, 2008
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    this made me cry so hard, well done