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[ Six feet above yet feeling six feet under ]

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Six feet above yet feeling six feet under

Ready and willing to give in and surrender

My eyes no longer shine like they used to

A heart mended with super glue

my eyes changed with out me seeing

I didn’t notice the person I was being

I swear I won’t lose my soul though

I’ll always protect her no matter how things go

I wrote my life in pen

I can’t rewrite the book , but I can change the end

My eyes have lost their true beauty and shape

I’m standing over a girl who holds my fate

I was always told I had my mothers eyes

Never ashamed but those words I now dispise

For I have become her and lost the upper hand

How this happened, I don’t understand

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  • Midnight Countess
    May 30
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    This is very good. i love it, no matter how many tears it brought me.
  • darkmindedfreak
    May 29
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    that was a really great poem...just so sad but it is beautiful!

  • stuckinabottle
    February 22
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    that wa sreally interesting...i really like the picture it flows well with the poem! i lovve the line "i wrote my life in pen" i kinda feel what you're trying to convey at that point...and it's very true you can't do life over there isn't really a white out for us humans...thank you for writing such excellent poetry...
    it's a great way to start of the day!