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Me and You

fresh new flowers,
sweet new birds,
long old thoughts,
soft new words,
Happy ending,
Starting new,
love and friendship,
Me and you.

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  • Anybodys-guess
    September 3, 2008

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    I just read one with a similar title by another poet on here. But yours is lighter and has an innocent feel to it. I like it. Later, AG


  • yassmin
    February 22, 2008
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    yeah short,sweet and direct to z point sweet friend


  • rhondasail
    February 22, 2008
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    I like the reassuring feel to this. Like, spring has come peeping over the horizon...Peace, Rhonda