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Mistaken Affection

I was unaware of the heart I stole
I do not feel I owe the toll

you were presumptuous,
and not mislead.
I didn't put those ideas in your head
so I feel no guilt for tears you shed

I do not love you.
I told you before
you were foolish to ever want more

you were so giving
I took what I could
perhaps my greed was misunderstood

I do hope you realize
I have never told you lies,
and is why I refuse to apologize.




Author notes

"The deepest cuts are on accident"
not sure if it fits but it's what I got from it

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  • Classic Crayons
    February 27, 2008

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    this was good and I like how you conveyed the theme in the quote into such a nice piece. thank you for entering my contest, I apreciate the effort.
    it does fit and it's nice.


  • GrowlingBear
    February 22, 2008
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    sounds like this is from experience .....nicely written


  • Phlegm
    February 22, 2008

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    This is a truly amazing piece of poetry. I can relate in more ways than one. This is truly amazing.

    -Marissa

  • Kiarra
    February 22, 2008
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    great!