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Signs of Nothingness

Missing image
Pale white skin
Blank stare
...Signs...
of
...Nothingness...

Cuts with no pain
Tears but no sounds
...Signs...
...of...
...Nothingness...

Motionless body
Cold to the touch
...Signs...
...of...
...Nothingness...

D..E..A..T..H

~Lady Raven~

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Nothing!
Written November 25th, 2003

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  • Lady Patricia
    September 25, 2004
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    use THIS ONE TOO.


  • Desire gold member
    November 26, 2003
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    Damn! Looks like one of my coworkers That pic is scary enough~ Great release my dear~ Big hugs and much love~Desire


  • November 25, 2003
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    mmmmm, this is yummy
    death's not scary, just nothing...
    I love darkness...


  • macandrew
    November 25, 2003
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    very good

    Wow, well done. This is a very strong poem. I could see the body lying before me, cold and motionless.

    Cuts with no pain
    Tears but no sounds
    ...Signs...
    ...of...
    ...Nothingness...

    John


  • Immortality
    November 25, 2003
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    Tisha

    Well..This was different. I Like.

    [.Wicked Jester.]
    .:Kati:.


  • November 25, 2003
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    DEATH...very much physically nothing...but so much more beyond that. Hmmmmm.....a sequel perhaps???? I love the art here. Well done!

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