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Can I Paint Your Sky?

Can I paint your sky

The red of Love

The orange of Fun

The yellow of Friendship

The green of Life

The blue of Memories

And the purple of Strength.

I'll paint your world

All the colors of the rainbow.

From the brightest of whites

to the darkest of black.

Follow the rainbow through

Fields of blooming flowers,

Through patches of thorns,

And over mountains and hills,

Through valleys and rivers,

To your special pot of gold.

I'll paint your sky

with a rainbow that leads right to

Your unimaginable

DESTINY...

 

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  • FredGeorgeWazlib
    March 2, 2008

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    Omg! This is one of my all time favorite poems! It's brilliant! Comparing the pot of gold at the end of a rainbow to destiny is pure genius!


  • shaunice
    February 22, 2008
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    i loved the ending of your poem. it was my favorite par


  • RainbowGirl257
    February 22, 2008

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    i especially like the ending and how you gave a different quality to each colour! i love this poem! good job on the prompt and good luck!