I will always love you
that’s just the thing
No matter how many nights we don’t talk
No matter how many times I feel alone
I know in your heart you love me
[so that is what I choose to believe]
Even though I know your holding her
Even though I know its her lips on yours
I know in your heart you love me
[so that is what I choose to believe]
No matter how many times you blow me off
Just so you can text or call her
no matter how much you talk about her
I will always love you
that’s just the thing
what could i do to improve this poem..
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once again, another awesome poem that a lot of people, like myself, can relate to. it's tough being a teenager in love, and a lot of people think that it's just stupid and over dramatic, but really, it's what teaches us, you know? and i think you really get this down in some of your poetry. good job!
cerbie
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this is realli gd,
i love how i can relate to it!
well done keep writing!
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Wow,
How can one be so blind to not see the beauty within you, and embrace it always. Oh well, that's my two cents.. Love yas, and I enjoy reading ya always.
Peace~ xo
Dad. xo
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Aww this is so sweet <3 I used to hope that my ex still loved me, even when he was dating my best friend. But I'm like the exact opposite.. With my boyfriend, I always think I'm doing or have done something wrong to make him love/care about me less =/
I love this one though, I really like the way it's set up (if that makes sense, lol) -
wow, so sad. Almost as sad as a novel I wrote about a forbidden love. (This is the link so you can read it. http://allpoetry.com/poem/3942406 ). I enjoy Tragic Love poems and this one is somewhat tragic in it's own way. Great write.
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