When I look into your eyes, I get lost in paradise.
Staring sweetly I can see, the sea embracing me.
I wrap you in my arms, your right where you belong
Let the waves brush this shore, your mine forevermore,
I get lost in paradise, through the raging sea in your eyes.
You’re the beauty I have needed to strengthen me.
Lips of fire igniting me, your the blaze that sets me free
Hold on to the mighty ship, that battles against the sea
No storm can hold me down, no waters are too deep
I shall cross the fires of Hell, no prisoner will I be.
To have the anchor lowered down, we will find victory.
Through the bondage of our love, there is no discrepancy.
I’ll look into your eyes and burn with such desire
Something about your ways sets this lonely ship on fire.
As the seas waves finally calm, then time will cease
Finalizing the storms damage, will surely be released.
Hold onto me and never loose sight my dear,
That no matter the storm, the promise remains forever clear,
When I look into your eyes, I get lost in paradise,
Staring sweetly I can see, the sea embracing me.
I wrap you in my arms, your right where you belong
Let the waves brush this shore, your mine forevermore
Author notes
Love,ahh the feeling...do you feel it???
A contest entry
- OOooo la love by Flight of Dragons.
600 points, ended February 29, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
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And if the ship burns to the waterline, we will set the sea ablaze. So wrapped up in each other we will lose many days. The passion swells with frothy white, as we get lost in each others sight. Love you baby...Scott
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reminds me very much of lyrics to a song. you should see if you can't put a tune to it. i love the visualization you used in this as well as the style you put the words to. very good job
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Oh yes. . .
I can feel it, this is a classic poem (or should be) it reminds me very much of some old poems that I've read style-wise. i must say it does capture my atention. Good job!
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I remember love. I haven't had any love in awhile. You have a little typo "hold on to me and never loose sight my dear" loose shoulde be lose. You probably pressed the same letter twice.
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Precious,
Your writes are so heartfelt, and filled with passion no doubt!
It's always a pleasure reading your works.
Thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest Victorious!
-Timothy
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