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All My Life

I never thought it would come down to this, thought this day I would surely miss.
All my life I have been looking for that special someone who wouldn't make me feel blue, and that's when I found you.
You were my first for everything, the one who gave me the most beautiful bling.
I was lost and couldn't find the light, and when I found you I knew that these feelings were right.
All my life I have been praying for someone to love, for God has answered my prayers and sent you down to me from above.
All my life I have waited for that special someone who would sweep me off my feet, someone who will cause my heart to race in a rapid beat.
Since I was a child I have been waiting all my life, for us to be wed and be husband and wife.

Author notes

Poem about people getting married; may be used as wedding vows for anyone as long as they mention my name since I wrote this.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 5, 2008

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    thank you very much for this poem entry into the contest for jonny and april. i wish you the best of luck in the judging. viyanna rosemarie


  • tony yates silver member
    March 6, 2008
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    well written

    from the heart well done, nice flow, good luck


  • individuality gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, a suggestion if i may? perhaps think of breaking up the lines so it is easier to read and it will help the presentation

  • Honeydew
    February 26, 2008

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    beautiful vows

    this is a very lovely write...i am to wed again soon and this has alot of verses in it that would pretain to my cituation and be a very lovely vow! great write and thank you for your entery my contest.


  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    February 22, 2008
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    Very Good

    I liked your poem.

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