Soft whisper on the breeze
Ever quiet; it foresees
Resolution to all this pain
End to strife—what a gain
Never stopping, always on
Into the war-torn lands beyond
Telling men of Godly peace
You bring us such sweet release
A contest entry
- Acrostics-four options by TabbyJoy.
450 points, ended March 10, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The flow and the rhyme in this one were both excellent. You've created a beautiful acrostic with a message. Nice. Thanks for entering!
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A powerful poem, but so much said
feel contentment, relaxs the head
welcome to AP,you'll find it nice
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rudolf
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked my poem--i haven't written very much, so it's always good to hear positive feedback
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Good job!!! Are you kidding me girl??? I'm still working up the nerve to try rhyme. This is really good. And you know I would never laugh at you... :-)
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Oohh, I like this. As I read it, it just rolled off my tongue so smoothly. I liked the rhyme...I like rhyme! I like how you describe what Serenity means to you. Thanks for the entry and good luck!
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