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(F) The Right Man

Tall, dark, handsome, I want a man who is going to be there for me whenever I ned him to be.
I need a man who is going to wipe away my tears and wash away my nightmares and fears.
Someone to hold me on those lonely nights, taking me on a magical flight.
Strong, brave, talented, my man has to be able to face any foe and deliver as many blows.
My future love has to be someone who is going to care for me throughout our entire life, as I do my duty as being his beloved wife.
And when I look down at my lovely childrens faces, looking at them with such grace.
They will know that I have found the right man.

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Not sure if it fits the prompt but I did my best.

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  • Frodofan silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    It does indeed fit. Nicely done. You could break the lines into two parts though, just for a nicer and easier to read format.

    Thanks for entering.


  • sanity
    April 8, 2008

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    this is lovely, i wonder is this just wishful thinking or is there really the perfect man??? I don't know but he sure sounds lovely... thank you for sharing... good luck.... hugs and love Linda xxxxx


  • And Hyetal
    March 2, 2008

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    I like how you described your perfect man here. Great write and thank you for entering!

    ~Cassie