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Forever Yours

Stumbling around,
I cant seem to grasp...
What happened to me?
It happened so fast.

Running away from pain,
I couldnt find a safe place...
Then you came,
to take this mask off my face.

Now I'm free,
I found who I am...
I found you,
my newest, dearest friend.

Words cannot describe,
these emotions that I can't show...
For all our eternity,
I will endlessly love you so.

You've taken
pain, heartache, and blood...
And given me
joy, truth, and love.

I have my life
for what you chose to do...
Yet I'll never know
just how to repay you.

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To a true friend...

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  • bleedingheart91
    February 27, 2008
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    Aw.

    Thats cute. Im adding you as a favorite. ^-^ I like your poems.


  • soda27pop
    February 24, 2008

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    you know how to put your heart into what you're writing. you know how to show your feelings and you're not afraid too just let it all out, keep up the good work^_^
    han-han


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 21, 2008

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    aw,,,
    this was such a lovely poem
    and dolly i am sure the best way to repay anyone who has helped you so, is just to keep up doing your very best amazing write again loved it and love you lots ..

    endless