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Color My World...

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The pallete holds a rainbow
of colors an array of pure
visual pleasure, to captivate
the imagination, as she creates
images, from her artistic flow

A prism of dreams and mysteries
to entertain the eye and make a
surrounding of magnificant scene,
with a variety of flowers and
bright butterflies and a lemony
sun and emerald fields and a
sapphire blue sky, filled with
cotton candy clouds and fluttering
birds,as trees stretch upward

Mother Nature with our world,
as her canvas sees her visions
come to life, as she transitions
her ideas, onto the planet and
giving us joy, by wrapping her
masterpiece around you and I


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  • RainbowGirl257
    March 3, 2008

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    i especially like the second stanza, and your good choice of vocabulary. the fact the line length is similar is also good. good luck and thanks for entering my contest!


  • StarLightResurrects
    February 21, 2008

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    I love this

    its completely descriptive and keeps you reading, filled with lots of imagery and creativeness! nice job and good luck!