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For Just One Second

For just one second I'd
love to feel sane.

For just one second I'd
love to feel loved.
This cruel world inhabits no
true reasons for living.

Do I dare say goodbye?
Could I do it without a
single tear shed?

My reflection holds
no value in my world.
It's a cruel temptation for
others to mock me without
mercy.

For just one second
I felt a sharp pain.
For just one second I saw
a broken expression.


For just one second I
felt regret for taking
my life. For just one second
did anyone regret making
my life a living hell?

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  • monu
    January 21

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    lovely truly an actual teenage thinking, you have efficiently pasted your thoughts and experiences its a rich poem, excellent job!! keep penning ...

  • StarLover
    January 18

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    Beautiful Write here... The flow is very good. Just remember in life that someone will always miss you after you die. Live life with no regrets... and learn from your mistakes... Thanx for the read! Well done! xoxo Mirnada


  • nobodys-girl
    January 3

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    i used to wonder if anyone would regret not being there for me after i died...sometimes i still do... anyway great poem. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!

  • MysteriousStrangerX
    January 1
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    awesome write...just...wow...

    thankyou for entering


  • alesana
    July 9, 2008

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    Great

    I love the last two lines. Great write. I looked at your page. from what I remember... Alesana and Bayside our like hecka among my favorite bands well alesana obviously is

  • cdudecosner
    June 14, 2008

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    There will always be people who hurt us, that you expressed very well. This is a great poem. I also believe however, that there will always be people who love us. Those are the ones that we should look for, even if it takes a long time to find them. Once again, great work on this piece, it was very good.


    • Snow White Queen
      June 14, 2008
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      Well, I'm learning the hard way apparently. But yet thankyou!
      Godspeed,
      Cheyenne


  • Creatress silver member
    February 22, 2008
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    Powerhouse poem...you deserve gold. Well done on conjuring this pain and putting it into this poem. Sounds like life not treated you with love and I'm sorry. I know this sounds clique but first you need to learn to love yourself...even if no one else seems to. That is where the real power is.
    Good luck

    Creatress


  • Salig Flicka
    February 22, 2008

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    *hugs my chey-bear* Don't worry, I'll make sure they regret ever even THINKING anything bad about you if I catch them... ehem...BOOOTIFUL poem! See ya at school!!

    ~Avan~
    PS Gratz on silver!!!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 21, 2008
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    Congrates on Silver.

    Thanks for sharing, great poem!

    -Timothy


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 21, 2008

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    Amazing!!!

    you hit it with this poem sweetie, great write i love how the ending kinda leaves you thinking hope all is o-ts and love lots,

    endless

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