Lustful longings
Dripping from salivated lips
Moistening the fair pout
With passionate desires
Saliva peaks on the tongue
Longing to be shared
With dry and salty lips
Author notes
desire
Poetic grace
Sister
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A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended February 21, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sensual Bliss. by BloodCrusted.
300 points, ended March 8, 2008, 13 entries
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525 points, ended February 25, 2008, 36 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ooh lala by blood-for-ink.
365 points, ended June 7, 2008, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes!! by ShaddowsDarkened.
430 points, ended June 30, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - There are no small poems Only small poets! Part 2 by GypsyEyes.
300 points, ended June 3, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn Me On by NeverSayAddiction.
725 points, ended July 10, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best AP Poet Contest by davidbetzer.
1500 points, ended August 2, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very few words. Which is good, because even they were tortuous.
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Very sensuous with so few words.
Very Nice
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me likey this one! i can relate very well! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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its interesting
First impressions, i had to think for a minute. I did not dislike, i think it is a very good piece of writing, however, something in it didn't seem to atract to me it overly.
A good poem though.
good luck in the contest,
keep writing,
holly x -
mmm... that was interesting
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Thank you
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Award Winning
Congrats on your poem and award and Welcome to my AP Family sister. Thank you for presenting your heart and fine work of poetry keep painting beautiful pictures and go with the flow of whatever spirit moves you. Welcome sister poet.
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Aw.
Such a passionate kiss explained.
I like it alot!
Nice write, and good luck!
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more like a passionate kiss...
wonder what the thoughts were to that....
congrates on gold...
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Very nice...great word choice and imagery...very yummy write...great job on the prompt.
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Awesome entry girlie. This was fantastic. The imagery in this was delicious!
Not that you should need it but good luck.
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