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Fading Knowledge

Old men ponder
Of future to come
Wasting their days
They sit and marvel
Only to find whats left to come
Is the fading knowledge
Of days past

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  • Arkbear gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Interesting ~

    You have given me something to ponder for sure :)

     

    Thank you for joining me in this 2 year celebration,

     

    Bear ~


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 22, 2008

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    Live for the present, not the past nor the future. Who knows if you will be alive to enjoy tomorrow. Certainly makes sense.


  • islekine gold member
    February 22, 2008
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    Nicely done!

    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on and on!
    *PEACE*


  • swimmeroks
    February 22, 2008
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    i like this one. good luck!


  • greatperhaps
    February 21, 2008

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    I like it!! Interesting, I liked how it explores the seeking of the future, but all that can come is the dissapearance of the past. How if you don't live in the moment then the moment will be gone. good luck in the contest!

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