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Your lost;My pain;

You never cared so don’t lie to yourself sweetie
You never wanted it to be just you and me
don’t fool your self into thinking
don’t try to make your self look good
You messed up you lies I cried the end
You had something amazing you had a girl who truly cared
You through her away that’s your lost dolly
Just a another pain for me, I hate you I wish
But hate is so strong not even you deserve  that word
It was my own fault for letting you drag me along
You never cared so don’t lie to your self sweetie
You never wanted it to be just you and me
So what is it you want, tell me
I cant be hurt by you again,, take whatever
Just let me be, I wish I could hate you
So many can see, don’t smile and hold me
don’t try and make your self look good
You had something amazing,
You had a girl who truly cared, you through her away
Your lost her pain another day.

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  • Dygurl
    February 25, 2008
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    very sad write, reminds me of a friend who is going through something like this. Great write of emotion.

    You might go through and spell check, and edit, i saw a few errors, but the major one is the "through" you are looking for is "threw" It threw me off every time i got to that word.

    Great write nicely done. Good luck in this thing we call love.


  • surface--tension
    February 21, 2008

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    man. i really want to scream at that person. i know all too well how this feels. guess it is true that love is blind. anyway, great job as expected! loved the picture!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    -Hugs-

    I love how you share your heart and get it all out.
    Thanks for sharing, and keep up the great works hun.

    Love Daddio~


  • missrockstar
    February 21, 2008
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    its very deep i felt this way so many times
    so i understand all about this


  • XXx-ALI-xXx
    February 21, 2008
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    awesome hun, way to write it out!!! un like me..

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