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Vague

Peel back the flesh of the twice injected beauty queen
Masses of cockroaches flutter into the air
Vomiting their sick dance of macabre on a single thread
Sewing it’s way into my body
Brain dead on the inside with wide fluttering eyelids
The nightmare of the crimson seeping through
Everyone knows and I trip down a staircase of reality
A mass puddle of brain tissue and blood underneath this corpse
Unraveled thread departs from the two sides of the scars
Gaping wounds glare at me in a twisted clown smile
Fresh red lipstick covers this sumptuous flesh
The pretty porcelain doll unwinds leaving the truth
A pile of limbs wrapped around each other for pitiful comfort
I lay their rocking back and forth to the skipping track
Repeating itself over and over inside me
“It’ll be ok, I promise” “One day it’ll all be ok”
A liar to myself, believer of false hopes
I tricked myself into oblivion and now it feasts upon me

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  • slipknotsomeone
    February 27, 2008

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    amazing

    details and the way with words was prefect. I agree with ( sideofthegun ) i could see a clear picture as i read this.


  • ProvehitoInAltum
    February 22, 2008

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    Jeez!

    I love it!!
    That was excellent!
    I could see an abstract picture as I readthis piece
    That was an extrondonary( I spelled that wrong) write!
    Gooood luck and very nice job