You reach into the deepest recesses
touching the hidden corners of my mind
squeezing the life out of my heart
while tearing out the little child
I don't know when
I gave you permission,
to find your pleasure
in destroying who I am.
Somehow, I want it back;
turn the key,
lock the door,
shut myself away.
You slip in the cracks
taking that last piece of me
what's left is this empty shell
you see before you
I'm empty with you
I'm empty without you
I lose myself with you
with you there is no me
Your chains bind me to your world
of happiness and personal pain
My heart drags heavy
Under your lock and key
I can't escape this addiction
Your torture is my pleasure
Your pleasure is my torture
Let me make you happy
Let me love you
Let me love
Let me
Let
Author notes
This is a pre-write. I understand a DQ. It's just something that fits the contest that would be a good read for you
A contest entry
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Comments
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It's as though sometimes we find what we need in the abuse and can't differentiate the line from where they end and we begin..
Shari
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I loved the mixing of the words. "Your torture is my pleasure. Your pleasure is my torture." Nice job.
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thank you.
♥
whisper
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WOW
This is definitely a mind blower indeed yet it is so amazingly done...The imagery not only painted a picture but also feed emotion so strong within this piece...A talent not many have with this kind of piece...Great penning...
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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good,
I thought it was really good to be honest, and something people dont usually write about. so i give you props.
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