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Forgotten until revealed.

Why is it now you choose to fail?
To loose control of your pathetic self.
Is it the attention you crave?
No.
Is it the pity you long for?
No.
Or is it the help you don't know how to get?
Thoughts flicker. Telling you this is not the way.
But you know no other, and at your most vulnerable you give in.
Scarlett tears run recklessly free.
Such relief. Such power.
Hidden away again, giving in to a pointless pain,
Whatever was aimed for is lost
Tired, desparate, exhausted.
You sleep.
Tears gently disolving,
leaving no more than a mark,
a memory of the previous nightmares.
forgotten, until revealed.

second piece of my re-invention

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  • Pretty -n- Pink
    October 5, 2008
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    i always enjoy reading your poems once again loved it and cant wait to read more of your work

  • Time focus on Me
    February 22, 2008

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    Beautiful Sis

    But you know no other, and at your most vulnerable you give in.
    Scarlett tears run recklessly free.
    Such relief. Such power.
    Hidden away again, giving in to a pointless pain,
    Whatever was aimed for is lost
    Tired, desparate, exhausted.
    You sleep.
    Tears gently disolving,
    leaving no more than a mark,
    a memory of the previous nightmares.
    forgotten, until revealed.
    great job with this powerful amazin job too. U did another fantastic job with this poem way to go sis. it shows through and through excatly how u feel. alsome job sis and you need someone to talk to sis I'm here for ya always hugs to ya sis. keep da ink flowin. great job with this poem.