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Dissatisfaction

If there’s another world that you want to know
A better place you want to go
If I am not enough, if you’re feeling blue

What can I say?
It’s all up to you

If there is more you’re searching for
A deeper mind, a brigter soul
Be tired no more
Be free

I’m sorry I’m not dissatisfied
My shallow mind is fulfilled with warmth
My inner eye is completely blind


So
Leave me if you want
Though I won’t cry I will be hurt
Always needing more
Maybe there is a proper door
For you to choose



Just know, that I dont wanna go
Still I just want to know
If you do

Though I’m lonely with you
I’ve made the decision
I know what I choose
And know I don’t wanna leave
I give all that I can give
But you’re
Still not satisfied
You said
You’re living inside a lie

And what can I do
How will I make myself more true?

Why don’t you just leave me?
Now I feel blue
What will I do?
What can I do?

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  • Asylaarix
    March 8, 2008
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    There is a lot of emotion in this piece ... almost seems more personal than anything ... I can see the anger and frustration in your words ... and the love and hurt as well ... this is very well done ... and very beautifully penned ... good luck in the contest ...

    Jayda